by KEVGOW
How many POV’s are you going to use ? Example ( not verbatim) : “She answered her son and he mumbled something I didn’t understand” ???? Who didn’t understand ? You the writer didn’t understand ? I know I certainly didn’t understand !!! You should keep it from one persons perspective ! Ie: “ She answered her son and he mumbled something she didn’t understand “ ,or “ I answered my son and he mumbled something I didn’t understand “ one perspective !
Lisa decided to talk with her son now that she was caught watching him jerking off to her being fucked by his cousin.
Now that her son is he 'chosen lover', am truly anxious to read where this goes......
When i read thiese stories i loved the and now im pregnant these stories jump started my love life