by KEVGOW
Change category to Group Sex. Your story is so unrealistic, it's losing its punch. Go back to Ch.1 and 2 and see what worked.
I really loved it. Don't care whether or not some of it seemed realistic or not. The very idea of a gangbang/incest crossover is very erotic to me. Especially when it involves pregnancy. If possible, could you write a chapter where aunt Lisa and cousin Allison both are pregnant and eventually gives birth?
YOU SHOULD DO ANOTHER CHAPTER...DOES ALLISON GET PREGNANT?HAVE CJ FUCK ALLISON... DOES IT CONT. AFTER THE BABY IS BORN... IS AUNTIE A SLUT THEN
You are a fan of Monzetsu for sure. And so am I, that’s why I love your story so much. As long as it’s about rape and pregnancy with giant dicks passing through the cervix, your work can only please me. (Beware, the fucking between the son and his mother is way too soft, make it harder). In “Tokimeki Fainting In Agony Balkan”, Monzetsu draws a woman getting fucked while being pregnant – one can see the baby inside! You know what you have to do now.
But please, enough of Black stallions humilating White women. Why not a Black virgin lady raped by a White dick for a change? She would get pregnant and of course would scream, scream, scream...
Mmmm... love your hot series... incest/gangbanging/reluctance/deep penetration... bring on the next chapter
Hey weirdo - you sure know that you're brain-sick ??
Seriously - I read Ch. 1 to where you described the guy's dick; 4 up to 5 inches in diameter !???! Buster - that's more than YOUR length. Isn't that funny?
Or is that a non-human fantasy? Or, do you know exactly nothing about the human body, let alone a feminine?
I stopped right there; I couldn't bring myself to read on any further.
Keep dreaming your gross dreams; but do everybody (including yourself) a favor AND STOP WRITING. If ever that scribble could be called the W-word.
You need to continue the story. It's been interesting so far.
Take some time and write another chapter with the detail you had before. Maybe try writing from third person singular?
looking forward with much anticipation for more chapters and added people.
Why not 40 or 60 times or even better keep it real add more boys if necessary to make it 80-100 times.
Is it reality-based? Not really. This story contains lots of factual inaccuracies and physically impossible situations. But, then again, so do most movies. However, is it erotic, sexy, and will it light a fire? Definitely YES!!! Take it with a grain of salt and just enjoy it...if you're looking for facts, try public television.
The white woman who wrote this series is obviously a middle-age freak who discovered BBC about a dozen years ago and has switched her writings from BDSM and non-conscent to interracial.
What a Mum lending her pussy to all the young boys
More stories like this PLEASE.
Gang bangs are a treat for most females. Want excitement, visit an On-Premise swingers club or have a GB at home. Watch your wife or GF take on seven guys and end up mounted nearly 48 times in her pussy. Nice stories, wish they were combined instead of one page at a time. You earned the highest rate. More cumming?
do not continue it, this was bad from the start and it did not get any better, aunt lisa should have stopped it after the first one, and divorced her husband for setting up the 2nd rape
maybe if jimmy and his men(men? really?! serious doubts !!) gang started pimping as a profession, rather than wannabe pimping, they could be men enough to give their women a life,and a luxurious one!! ;)
Really enjoyed these stories. Hope there is more to cum :). Love that forced sex. Really turned them out. Allison's mom needs to get raped next
Hope Allison got pregnant too after her gangbang my friends and me got my mom and their moms too we gangbanged them against their will fuck one all day find out week later that 4 of them were pregnant with them getting gangbang they wouldn't know who the father was.there was one mother we got she had very large tits we gangbanged her real good 2 cocks in her cunt and one in her ass and in her mouth right down her throat when cum in her you could hear her scream with cock down her throat1st one to cum was down her throat once he pulled out of her mouth we fucked her so hard she started to cut and yell out bastards we made sure we held on to her when she was cumming all3 of us cum in her cunt and ass she was still cumming once she finished I grabbed her hair forced my cock down her throat she gagged told her your arse now 40 yr old mom turned into gangbang slut that gave us 4 kids another one on the way
I WOULD HAVE LOVE TO BE THERE SND JOIN IN THE ACTION! DARE TO REPLY BACK?
So did your cousin get knocked up me knocked up my mom aunt sister and two of my aunts daughters
Hot for women like me with submissive streaks, but it all sounds very unrealistic.
Took my mom and aunt on vacation when got to resort there was one room left with king size bed nudist resort to my loolmked good nude extra large dark brown nipples I pushed her on her back got on top of her rammed my cock up in her she screamed out loud fuck your big just kept fucking her hard until told her your going to be carrying my kid in you even samething to my mom they both did pregnacy test my aunt called bastard told her you wanted get knocked up from different guys told her only black guys here there goal knock single or married woman every woman be at pool getting large cocks in them told both of them I entered both of you take on 20 guys each let them cum inside you my aunt yelled out there is no dam way let anybody fuck me except you I said good but for now you and mom are doing full hardcore gangbang and being filmed once we got to pool one woman was screaming had Tree extra large cocks in her cun one in her ass down her throat they all let loose inside her once done with her they picked her upyelling nomore her husband looked at her said you did good and she told him we are getting divorced said only guys going fuck me are black guys then said to him I am carrying black kid in me now
Like story cousin didn't want to get pregnant hope did because I fucked my cousin got her pregnant both got married have three kids together both are parents found out my mom and aunt came over they talked to us saying they wanted me to knock them up my mom told my aunt you go first told them both strip down and to lay on floor in living room got undress raised my aunts legs up then rammed her hard screamed until she orgasmed hard put my sperm in like did my mom week later back over told us both had my kid in them then said to us both moving in with you two got bigger house now I fuck three woman even have are own orgy together
Like it aunt got knocked up then being gangbanged to niece being fucked gangbanged hope she got knocked up too
Need a sequel with CJ fucking his sister Allison, maybe a threesome with the aunt or their mother.