All Comments on 'Foreplay'

Whew! Very HOT! Thanks for taking me there~

Really could feel you/the scene. Great writing and absolutely love how you include the songs. Music and sex do go hand in hand..it complements the "Dance". Enjoyed this very much!

Your expert usage of the present narrative tense and the flow of your words, not to mention that the notion of employing music to complement the sex, the intensity, and acting almost as a parrallel narration is brilliant.

I thought it was very well done. Please keep writing as the caliber is high. As I regularly maintain, the better authors are the ones with some age and experience as well as better writing skills. You've proved it.