All Comments on 'Forever Eve Ch. 01'

Please tell me there are more chapters coming...I loved this story. I can't wait to see if Azriel and Eve meet again.

Wow! This is really good. Can't wait to read more. :)

Great start! I'm excited to see where this goes.

Great intro and a very fascinating idea. Thank you, by the way, for not ruining the concept of a cursed immortality with yet another twist on the vampire mythos.<br>

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It gave me some neat ideas as well, and for that I also thank you!

A wonderful start and a nice twist on immortality and the potential complications. Have included this story in my favorites so I am sure to follow the coming chapters. Please do not keep us waiting.

I only meant to glance, then only meant to skim, and then wished there was more to read! Even though no one else was here, I was embarrassed and surprised to be tensing along with Eve. ^_^ So - except for some rough words/phrases that broke the lovely spell you cast -

Wow.

I normally dont read scifi/fantasy though this had my cock stirring. Looking forward to a sequel.

No continuation for 6 years.