All Comments on 'Fortuitous'

Nice twist to the usual BDSM stuff. Write more, please.

to the BDSM section. I'd like to read a sequel, perhaps from the viewpoint of one of the other characters in this story.

This had a lot for a "techno-geek" like myself who has skills in electronics, software, woodowrking and metalwork...<br><br>I was almost sad when I realized you'd skipped forward quite a bit at the end...<br><br>Maybe you could write a sequel or two that tell the story of the time between leaing that day, and the point where he and Dawn have two school aged sons?<br><br>Again, well written, arousing and an all around good read!

i really enjoyed this story, something i can or would like to be able to identify with. like it says, i loved the subject matter, and your writing is pretty good, keep up the great work. it really kept me interested, sort of an interesting story with some hot sex in it. thank you

I've read all your stories and enjoy the way you've explored several genres, crafting very creative tales for each category.

My only regret is that I stumbled upon your writing at this late date. Here's hoping that you'll continue with your art for the enjoyment of Literotica readers.

Great stuff! More please!

I think I enjoyed this tale more than almost anything I've read on Literotica. I loved the approach to life that Combs displayed - why not get paid well when you've created something unique for those who can afford it. I laughed when I read the line about "tripling my cost" to set the price.

Very clever devices and a very clever story.

Thank you!

What a great story! I laughed out loud. I can totally see this happening.

beautifully written and extremely explicit, from a technical point of view.

Good thing it wasn't software you created. Someone would want you to give away as open source.