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A thrilling bliss radiated throughout Shannon's nerves. She bit her bottom lip, but as the rush went through her being, she started to relax. Ryan looked at his sister in this state of immense satisfaction, and slowly pumped his dick in and out of her tightening vagina. He let the head barely escape before pushing back inside. He felt her nipples brushing against his chest, and that sent him into the euphoria of his own orgasm. Burying his prick inside his sister, he fired shots of his semen inside her.
Shannon felt he brother blasting inside of her. She was thankful that her doctor had put her on the pill when she was sixteen. When Ryan had come out of his orgasm, Shannon lay down on the bed next to him. The underwear that was at Ryan's thighs were soaked in their fluids and in sweat.
"God, Shannon that was great."
After kissing her brother on the cheek she responded.
"Yes, it was. That was certainly unexpected."
Shannon stood up next to the bed.
"Where are you going?"
"I am going to go turn off the shower, and use the bathroom. And then get you a clean pair of underwear."
- COMMENTS
Anonymousabout 17 years agoI liked the last two thirds but she never did explain to him why she burst into the bathroom .
Anonymousabout 17 years agoI would agree.... The use of all the brand names.. (which I was familiar with) was just distracting...(who cares what kind of jacket he has on!) but perhaps, for you, there is some erotic component for you in the use of them.
In which case... cool.. Whatever blows your skirt up, as the expression goes.
I would suggest a bit more character development next time. Why, for instance, does the sister suddenly start sucking his cock because he is wearing her underwear. You explained his motivation... next time explain her's... This will be harder(sic)for a male to do but it is necessary for the story to be believable, which I think is the point...
Anyway.. I can tell you enjoyed writing it... so keep at it!
Anonymousabout 17 years agoThe story's sort of OK, but the style is ruined by the profusion - indeed overload - of brand names which 90% of the world, including me, have never heard of. The USA is not the only source of readers on Literotica, you know. Even if we had heard of these products, it would still sound as if you were not telling a story so much as showing off your knowledge of them, or at least your familiarity with their names - or maybe your envy of those who have them. Keith
