by Ken Nitsua
honestly, it's not quite as good as some of your other works. I guess the foursome thing is just a little bit too much for a straight female reader like me..:P
Thanks good story... but I think. Lloyd is not a good person n try to break his own friends marriage n he is probable in love or wanted Bruce for himself... remember he seduced Bruce first n then when not convinced Bruce to continue he seduced Bruce' s partner. I think he hope by that he would break them n then go for Bruce himself, n then again at the weekend four-some he tried to cling to by himself... n forced Bruce to cheated on his partner in the middle of the night n again when Bruce decided to spend time with Charlie he was jealous n hurt. If any one is to be hurt n jealous its Bruce's partner n not him. M glad Charlie kicked him out... people like him don't deserves a happy ending.
I know everyone doesn’t agree with me, but I can’t imagine watching your partner/soulmate fucking or being fucked by someone else and not feeling jealous, angry and betrayed. Then throw in that Lloyd had dishonestly cheated with each of them before that weekend, who would ever agree to such an idea. Highly implausible and in some parts just straight up hurtful to read.