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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
Great job!

Fun, sexy and it flows really nicely. Well done!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
Nice, enjoyable romp

It's nice to read a story with 4 ladies - who enjoy each other's company - instead of the "she's jealous of her" and the intense rivalries, all for a man. That being said, I like the pairing of Atlantia and Danny the best.

I like Danny and his "voice", plus his knowledge of the Atlas Mountains, and his varied life so far. He comes across as a keeper.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago

Lively fantasy.

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I want to write and read interesting, believable stories, although a touch of humour or the bizarre will usually help! Most importantly, I want to respect my characters. I see too much disrespect in the sex we see around, especially for women.

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