All Comments on 'Four Scarves Ch. 02'

by R_Peterson

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
looking forward to rest of stories

Very well done, I do not care for too much wham bang thank you mam stuff, this is gentle exposure, nice neat, not involving getting it in all holes. Delicate situations where the woman is not being used, but is allowed to enjoy the produce of her own doing .. I do hope you keep these lines in the rest of your stories . It brings back memories of my youth when I first began dating a wonderful girl who would often let me uncover her assets in often very very public places

SweetLittleLiarSweetLittleLiarabout 17 years ago
Still sizzling, like Ch. 1

I love the pleasure she takes in her foray into exhibitionism. I think the direct connection between Amanda and her Secret Admirer, and her excitement in complying with his wishes was a little more pronounced in Chapter 1, and to me that's the most erotic thing about this work. I can't wait to find out what he will ask of her next ... and how she will respond. Thanks for the very hot writing here, Mr. Peterson!

oldwinooldwinoabout 17 years ago
Story Heats Up

Great story continues! It's amazing how many housewives do that with strangers they meet on websites like NN. Hope you continue (SOON) with nastier public exhibition. My gf will love this series.

Did you do a story for the Earthday contest?

docBluedocBluealmost 17 years ago
another step

Amanda gets a little more daring despite (maybe because of) not knowing her voyuer. Nice build up. The reader is enticed to the next story as much as Amanda

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