All Comments on 'Four Words Ch. 01'

This seems to be a spanking story, which some readers would enjoy if you placed it in the fetish category.

This should be in the Stupid category.

While one could argue that this belongs in the Fetish category, it would be much more difficult to argue that this is not a good stand-alone story and the beginning of an interesting series.

boring

...... everyone has one and they all stink. I enjoyed this story, though a little proof-reading wouldn't hurt if there will be more. Actually reading it or having someone else read it might help... instead of going with spell check. I titled this comment as I did because so many "anonymous" people have suggested it shouldn't be in this category. Why??, I have no idea. I'm not sure if this is based in reality but if it is, I commend you and your wife for taking the positions in the household seriously. Reward and discipline can only improve a relationship. The relationships where the participants are equals are the reason the divorce rate is so high. THAT is My opinion.

4 stars and hoping for more chapters.

Love the whole story! Special credit for the humiliating embroidery on the spanking stool, mmm!

The idea of panty punishment intrigues...

" Wife is humilated " ruined any chance for most to read them. When the author can't even spell "humiliated" in the title category, there is no sense in going any further.

He said our credit card but it must be just his. Does she not work and pay part of the bills. I'd be leaving him.

This about a BULLY and not a Loving Partner. Believe a Master should show love and not just power which drives the partner into a life of FEAR