All Comments on 'Fourth of July Slumber Party'

Wow really hot story! I like how you write not too fast and not too slow thank you!

"think about it for a second: If nobody cares about bad writing with poor grammar, nonexistent punctuation and more typo's than chocolate chips in a cookie, then why do people (like me) point them out?"

Probably because you're an anal-retentive jagoff...

Good story. So good, I wasn't a grammar nazi like the other fucktards. I don't care, it's a good story. They can go fuck themselves.

In fastany everything doesn't have to be so proper, Great Story can't wait for #2, please let us know what happens when the brother finds out?

That was so hot I had two orgasms while reading

sluts

Cold have been better. From proper seduction to rushed sex.

This was dumb.