All Comments on 'Freakin' with the Enemy Ch. 05'

Oh my gosh, I turned to page three of this chapter and found the end of our little Peyton Place saga. To say I am disappointed would be a gross understatement, as there is so much more to tell in this story.

Does Danielle get an abortion, or put the snare on virile and manly Denny? Does daddy give the babies father a job to see if he can stay on the straight and narrow? Can Denny keep his oversize dick in just one of the family females, or will he continue to keep Mom and Daughter happy (errr or not)?

On bended knee, I beg you to continue this little saga.

I hope you write for a living, this is the best amateur piece I've ever come across. Love the build up. Just wish there was more! Please continue, it would be a shame not to!

Your a great writer!

You’re a great writer.