by Egmont Grigor
you and about four other writers on this site are tops.
once again you made me laugh true to your form you had another great story and I loved it But some of your stories of late have not been as long as I like. but thank you for you effort! And Keep them cumming
I liked the story, but found it lacking in depth. Too much story in too less words.
Two or three more pages would have done the trick for me.
Thank you for the read.
Not sure why this has such a high rating. It's erotic couplings not romance. Not that well written either.