All Comments on 'Free Universal Carnal Knowledge Pt. 03'

great storyline and imagination is going heaps with all the possibilities keep the stories coming...

The story is getting very interesting, and from the signs you are giving, promises to be quite hot!

Your writing continues to move the story along well. I enjoyed the fact that you introduced three new young females into the story - Connie (actually mentioned first in part 2), Fran, and the young blonde on the tube.

After reading Part 1 again, I noticed that this NOVEL might be lengthy - since the first paragraph after "Drink it" indicates that all this started "less than a year ago". Part 6 takes us only a couple of days into the story, so obviously - there's a lot more to come!!

Not much in the sex department, but who needs it? Most of the greatest stories ever written have absolutely no sex in them. It's all about the writing and you're doing a good job at it.