All Comments on 'Free Wolf'

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alexandra36alexandra36about 13 years ago

Enjoyed reading your story, thanks!

Will this be a series or this is it?

Cheers! (:

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
I liked it!

But Tony the Tiger? Lolz

avidreader_01avidreader_01about 13 years ago
lol

tony the tiger, lol... enjoyable story and interesting take-- tiger taken by the wolf. In the wild the tiger is always the dominate over the wolf, but I like your take and hopefully you'll do a part 2 where Tony gets introduced to pack life

WolfGirl102WolfGirl102about 13 years ago
Awesome

I loved it but tony the tiger is amusing lol, continue on though. (:

talismaniatalismaniaabout 13 years ago
Hot!

I really enjoyed the dominance and submission going on in your story and hope to see more. Yeah, Tony the Tiger is fun! :)

nomoretears00nomoretears00about 13 years ago
Oh damn...

loved the play on the name, that was funny! This was great, hope you have more planned for these two!

geemeedeegeemeedeeabout 13 years ago
"Submit." Mmmm.

I'd like to see more of them as well. They've said less than 30 words to each other and know nothing about each other. Following them as they build their relationship outside of the bedroom would be fun. Hope you continue!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago

Great story! I'd only have liked it if you had Kyle tell him he was an Alpha. I believe it says that in the description in your profile. I love that despite submitting in the end he put up a bit of a fight before he did. Your story is well-written and I hope you write more about these two. They are great characters. I'd love to see how the pack reacts to a cat and how he reacts being a more solitary creature. Please continue the story.

lonesomedove66lonesomedove66over 12 years ago
Ditto

Second time around for me and still love it

dinkybootsdinkybootsalmost 12 years ago

it not as good as the other werewolfe stories.?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago

It felt like it was missing something i can't put my finger on it.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
i see what you did there

The humor in tony the tiger is not lost on me. Just sayin'

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Funny!!!

Reading it again (5th time, I think) and Tony the Tiger still makes me giggle.

TimothyMTimothyMover 11 years ago

I'm glad I didn't start reading this before the series was complete. It was so hot that I would have had a hard time waiting for the next chapter. I think this is my fifth time around and I still enjoy your tiger - werewolf set up and the instant erotic interaction between them.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago

Great story. I almost didn't read it when I saw you named your tiger Tony, but I'm glad I got over that bit. Very hot.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Hot

I love it! It's so damn hot! This is one of a few gay stories that I really enjoyed reading. I absolutely love reading paranormal sex stories and this is one of the best!

JolliTheAppleJolliTheApplealmost 11 years ago
Tony the Tiger

"Its grrreat!"

I'm sorry, i just had to do it.Now that out of my system, let me tell you my thought. That was super hot. Loved it.

PaleAngel_90PaleAngel_90over 10 years ago
Just Wow

That was hot,and somewhat tender i liked the big badass Alpha being somewhat tender,so cute :)

jenellesljenelleslalmost 9 years ago
Well written romance

I love the entire series. I hope I can write this well some day. I had the feeling this was two Alphas. Both Tony and Kyle. I would love to see how this plays out both with the parents and with the old Alpha in Albuquerque. Please consider another set to carry this on. Perhaps Kyle and Tony's pack will become THE pack in this part of the world.

Keep up the good work

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
I love you.

I couldn't even focus on pleasuring myself your writing was so good☺️💗

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Great storie

I is a pity that the author stoped writing suco fantastic stories.

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