All Comments on 'Freeing Abby'

MaddieK:

Very glad to see your writings again!!!

A very resounding 10**********

I really liked this, what a loving couple. He did not give up and she opened up. Such a shy, tentative and wondrously beautiful short story of love, respect, and growth.

Well-written story, but I doubt spanking is the right way to help an abused woman.

very nice and gentle. i'm sure they'll have a lot to discover as time goes by!

To be wanted.....

I really enjoyed this story. It was well-written and incredibly sweet! Maybe you could write a sequel with more of Abby and Daniel's sexual escapades?

Sorry Maddie, i found this just too long for a single story. i believe that you should have cut this story into at least 2 smaller parts.

i could not vote for the story either. whilst the story is properly formatted and edited, it is because of the length that i would vote 0 stars. but alas, there is no 0 star vote choice.

I also agree with the prior comments made that spanking an abuse woman is not what i think is proper for an abused woman.

Jake

Jake who cares! A person who believes the story is properly formatted and edited, yet because the story is "too long" would give it a zero is ridiculously pathetic. I can understand your thoughts and others regarding the spanking, and can certainly understand a vote of 3 or 4 for that. But for length??????? A zero?!? How sad for you to base a low score on how long a story is. If it was too long for your attention span, quite easily you could have read a page a day. So your criticism for length is moot. Did your feeble mind think of that? Obviously not. I will suggest you forgo stories that are more than a few paragraphs. I will stop now, because I don't want your little mind too wander off.

Glad you didn't vote. Five stars from me. Well done!!!

I also wish to apologize to the author for trouncing this commenter. Normally I don't but, his comment was absolutely dumb and beyond stupid.

Glad to see your muse has returned

One of the best reads I have had on this site. Very believable, highly erotic. More please.