by Alex De Kok
Well, I was wrong in my guess that this one would go to the parents, but I had not looked at the title or the "First Time" category. This was really, really, good. Now I wonder if Kirsty will learn how to deep throat. That could anchor another episode in her continuing education. Of course, we'd all like to hear more from the other teens and the parents, too as others have suggested. I really enjoy the "cumming out" of the teens as they know much more than I did at the same age. I didn't learn about eating and sucking until much later, but the first time and subsequent times with my girl were exciting. Nothing like making love with one you love. Bring on more, Alex, you are on a roll!
Makes me wish the girls I met at the beach had their attitude.
What happens next?
I LOVED THIS STORY. Dude, it fuckin rocked! If I hadn't masturbated twice today already, for sure I would have during my time reading this story! I like all the characters and especially the last sex scene. I agree with one of the reviewers here. If you move on to the rest of the characters' sex scenes, also the parents and add some more stuff to it that writers usually tend to do with some sort of plot other than sequential love making with alternating characters, then you've got yourself a winning novel my friend. You'd be VERY Successful!
PLEASE write more of these stories! I need more. :]
Very hot. Characters a bit unbelievable (an 18 year old gorgeous virgin who jump into bed with a guy she just met?) but made up for by some very nice erotica.
I do hope your going to write more, that was brilliant, so horny.
I agree with the first responder here, this is one really well-put-together story!! I have not read anything lately to compare with this.
But you need to carry it on to the others and to the parents. Man this could be a book by the time you finish!
Wonderful characterization, a very enticing plot line, and excellent descriptions make this story one of the best I've yet read on Lit!