by EmmyLou93
You made the story so real I felt I was in the room watching. Hope you continue to write more. Maybe tell about some of your true adventures or the ones you want to have.
I would love to read how father has anal sex with his daughter for the first time. Your stories super HOT HOT HOT!!! Don't stop now!!! Thank you!!
Mostly enjoyed it, but kind of ruined it for me with him calling her a whore and saying 'fucking' just seemed kind of out of place. Otherwise great, if short :)
Your writing was very good, almost perfect. I'll explain "almost" privately if you wish. I've marked :Favorite Story and Favorite Author so I can watch for more of you as you continue to write for us.
It seems that half the authors here
don't know the difference between WAIST and WASTE. WAIST is the part of the body above the hips. WASTE is the trash that is put into the garbage pail.
Very well done. Good story told in fairy-tale language of a rutting passion between a very real father and daughter. Very nice irony there. Good characters well realized. A wonderful tearing apart of conventional thinking. If we can strip away the fantasy the reality can be, and usually is, so much better.