by LitEroCat
etait si CHAUD CHAUD CAUD! She was 90 and spoke with such a high pitch Ineeded a dog to translate some!
What an amazing story! PLEASE Tell me where and
when I can see a public display like this one!
~The only thing that I didn't really enjoy was the
French that wasn't translated... It adds a flair
to the story, but I for one, didn't take French in
any of my schooling, so I couldn't interpret much
past 'Ca va?' (i did take an introduction to
French, but that was over 9yrs ago...)
it would be nice to translate, so the readers who
don't know the language can follow along too!
Other than that, GREAT STORY, and it really had me
believing I was in the pizza shop watching the
story unfold, instead of Blustery PA reading about it!
I'd love to be there when the teacher lays out on the dining room table and we all get to eat and fuck her.