All Comments on 'Frenemies with Benefits'

i look forward to the next chapter....

a well written story, beliveable plot line (though im not sure why he yelled at her in the car before he'd checked she was ok) and a 'leave em wanting more' ending..l i'll definately be loiking out for the next chapter ;-)

I really like it keep goings:)

Tou're doing a great job.......

This was a really good story. A few spelling mistakes here and there, but nothing to detract from the actual plot. Really looking forward to reading the next chapter!

I love stories like this and there hasnt been one of these out for a long time. I love the characters already and the storyline. You did a great job so far with giving a bit of history on them and into their current lives. I really look forward to more from you on this story. (Oh...and the sex was HOTTTTTT too, ;)

I really enjoyed the beginning of this story can't wait for the next chapter.

Please keep it up, I sincerely think this has the potential to be more amazing than it already is. I'm falling in love with the story and especially the characters. Absolutely awesome.

nice start. :) i can't wait to read more. ;)

Thank you so much for the compliments and constructive criticism. I truly appreciate any feedback. Thank you so much for the compliments and constructive criticism. Be looking for ch 2! It's just been submitted. If you habe any ideas for the story, feel free to send me feedback or private message me if you have a lit account.

I also don't know where you're going, but I'm going to enjoy the trip. Boy hates girl, girl hates boy, they fuck each other's brains out is an old, old formula, because it works. You have to like the characters, but I did and you've done a good job in making both of them likeable. The only genre on this site that comes anywhere near loving wives for me is the romance, and this is a good one.

It's really brilliant, and the story is very engaging as well.

It could have used just a tiny bit more editing, but I'm probably just jealous. ;) John is such a prick; he doesn't deserve Jennifer. :)

wow, amazing. its like the 3rd grade for grown ups! lol. i totally understand jennifer's resentment in all this. Im curious as to what kinda friends john and mike really are.

Wow, you certainly set up some great tension with these two. You did a great job giving enough back ground to understand who these two are, just enough, to make their competition and hatred inevitable. The fact that they both see the physical attractiveness of the other was foundation enough to draw them.

And the sex... very nice indeed!

More more please. This is great stuff and quite different to some of the usual stories. Well written too. Can't wait for part 2

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And I can't wait to read more! Great tension between the characters and it ignited with HOT results. Really can't wait to read more about these two!

this is a great beginning and the chemistry b/t jenny & john is explosive...cant wait for more

No spare? And his spare fits her Mini Cooper? Yes, I'm nitpicking, but it's because the rest of the story is so good. Five stars.

This I love you and I hate you relationship is so hot and provides lots of possibilities. Keep chapter 2 coming ...

please continue this story!!! it's great! can't wait to read more!!!

I hope the rest of the story is just has hot as the beginning

Keeping the friction between them going after the romp in the shower was brilliant hopefully you can keep it alive longer

Keep this going. Please...

Fun and games! Yeah.

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