All Comments on 'Fresh Meat'

I admit the first time I clicked on this story and read about "Boy" eating people, I was grossed out and decided not to read it. When I clicked onto it again tonight and jumped to the beginning of the next part, with Isabel in the town, it pulled me in. From there, I had to keep reading to see how it would all play out.

It's a bit grisly, but the sex scenes were good and the story compelling. The tension in the last page kept building until I was almost afraid to keep reading, but couldn't stop!

The technical quality of your writing is also better than at least 90% of the stories I've read here. It seems strange to compliment someone for simply writing correctly, but as I said, it's very rare here!

Good job! Hope to see more of your work!

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Well written, good detail. You know from the first sentence that its gonna get grisly yet you managed to keep the fun in. I very much enjoyed this one. Keep up the good work and good luck.

How much counseling will she need to get over all of that? Good story. Very disturbing.