All Comments on 'Freshman Year Ch. 02'

Good story, but breaking them up isn't great

gee another story of a guy with a dick 3ft long and 40in around god must hate the rest of us normals since he only gave us an avg. of 6-6.5 in long and 1-2in around.

Actually, I was thinking his dick was about 12 inches long and 8 around, but I get your point. Why write about extremely large dicks? It's a strange obsession. I'm thinking about writing a story with a more normal sized penis next time.

That's a good suggestion. I've been writing and submitting each chapter in one writing session, but maybe I'll take more time next time and write something longer.

Stories about big dicks are fine, i think they are better when its within the realm of possibility. 12 inches might be OK, other stories have mentioned them be as long as two feet. Thats just silly.

Also, if you are really only two inches around I feel sorry for you...

this is a great story you have a lot of talent

this story is awesome dude! don't listen to the critics, it's a fantasy! Love the huge dick, tight puss, youth, bleeding, muscle and being walked in on! More!

The room mate walking in near the end was a great surprise as I had that happen to me in school. Writers can go overboard with dick size and turn a story from hot to farce. Really, 15in? You do a good job on this. Write more chapters and throw some humor in.

Realistic consequences of his large dick size as well, very rare to see in stories.

I know it’s been years since the chapter was posted but i’m still hoping for more!

pretty sure this is only the 2nd 1 star all my years browsing Lit...

what an animal...