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AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
A bit dense.

Why do you use such long paragraphs? A bit difficult in Lit's format.

I've read a few of your stories but have given up as you seem to write monologues without dialogue.

Sorry.

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Former SR71 pilot, currently professional writer and book editor; writes under name "habu" on other erotica sites. My erotica books can be found under the author name habu or Dirk Hessian (and coauthored books with Sabb under the names Shabbu or Stephen Kessel) at S...