by fittytuck
Dude you gotta make a males cock bigger than average 8" 9" and above, 6.5 is to small, other than that the story was great, but remember, big cock makes us girls scream
I liked your story very much, go on - I'm waiting for more
A good story. Yes, we need to know who screamed. It must be his ex girlfriend but I dinna know how she would be there. How did Alyssia know he had been dumped? Sounds like Alyssia and the ex know each other or word REALLY gets around. Or ex is on the softball team???
Measurements are fine. We need to know he doesn't have a 3" dick trying to be a stud. Plus 36C has an attraction all it's own for many. 36B for me.
Your deatils are very good. Enjoyed the chapter and ready for more.
Pay no attention to perpetual dissenters.
Not too bad at all. Good job on a first try. It sure made me hot. Liked the detail in what they each did. Made picturing it easier.
Lose the measurements. The only distract and detract from the story.
really good story, had me hard all the way through, would like to see these two continue, maybe get the other housemates envoloved?