All Comments on 'Fridays at Two'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
You're sick!

You're sick baby! YOU ARE SICK! Gawd, i love your stories!! Please write some more!

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Surprisingly sweet

I really didn't know what the expect from this story but I decided to read it just cause. And I'm so glad I did! I loved reading about how Ronald and Rusty fell for each other.

My only complaint is that time passed too quickly in the story. Before I knew it, years had passed. I would have liked to see more of how their relationship progressed, beyond the sex. Although she didn't have purely altruistic motives, I thought Zelda was a really good, kind-hearted person.

If you ever write any kind of continuation for this, I hope they ask Zelda to be their kid's godmother. If they have kids, that is. Won't they have wonderful stories of their youth to tell?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
HOT DAMN, WOMAN!

This was a great storyline! Needed more sex, tho. :)

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