All Comments on 'Friends and Foes Ch. 11'

Great chapter! I know I am going to like the ending. It's sort of fun to be HOOKED!

I too figured out the bro/sis thing... and also thought it was the grandmother, whom was behind the kidnapping lol made me raise an eyebrow as I found out it was the mother. she was such the obvious choice, guess thats why I didn't even consider her. haha your an amazing writer and I love this story!!!

Figured out the brother/sister thing fairly early on, but I thought the grandmother was the baddie. Makes MUCH more sense that it's the mom.

I cant believe I was right on both accounts!:-o Woohoo! Didnt imagine them to be twins though but it makes more sense. Brilliant stuff as always. Cant sing your praises enough. Twas a fun read. Enjoyed it immensely and I cant wait for the finale... Cat

Well I just love this story. Don't take long in writing the next chapter.

This story is briliantly done...You are an amazing writer. You caught me by surprise, Adam's mother was the furthest from my mind. I was thinkig more along the line of the grandmother.

However this is an excellent turn of event. I really love this and all ur postings so far...Hope we will see regular pieces from u.

Fabulous and amazing writing

Love the plot development. You are a great writer.