All Comments on 'Friends and Lovers'

Another fantastic piece from Pelaam. Great story telling, filled with love and hot sex!!. Hope u keep it up

Thank you again for sharing your writings!

Every time you pull your reader in and make them love the guys in it. You can make a bad day good!!! Thank you for all of your stories. Take care!

You have an exceptional way of telling a story. I love being sucked into whatever world you create and am sad when it is at an end. I loved this story so much. Thank you for continuing to share your gift of writing with us.

I love all of your work :D I always start crying out "Yes yes yes!" whenever you update, in a very un-adult fashion XD As another commenter said, you create such realistic worlds that a reader just gets dragged into and never wants to reemerge!

Omg this story is the best uv written so far. I love ur stories but some usually seem repatishuse ( parden my spelling) like cobalt blue good storys they just sound like the same thing over and over agean. But let it be said that at least in my book u are in the top ten of the best writers on lirotica. Your storys can leave a person in tears and make there whole day perfect. U are phenominal keep up the good work. Oh and even the best writers have some repetative stories so dont get offended u are still amazing, i wish i could write as good as u

and everyone of your posts at least a hundred times, and each time is like the first. simply amazing.

Simply delightful.

This is the best story you have ever written. It's so full of action and romance and i can't get enough of it! I love it and the characters are all so beautiful and even though its a work of fiction i still can't help but to hope they continue living happily ever after! Amazing, wonderful story and can't wait to read more of your work! Cheers!

Wat exactly are Cole and Kiran. N wow pregnant men. Incredible. This go me hot. And I'm a girl who likes gay sex. Lol. XD.

I just wanted to say that this was a beautiful and well thought out story. I would like to see it continued on with Davin and Levon's child being born.

Such an imagination. Loved the premise, characters and resolution of the plot. Such a gift you have!

such a gift you have to churn this crap out ..boring rubbish

I don't think you should be judge anyone's writing and call it crap. I don't see you have any stories up, so shut-up and I think your story was beautiful keep writing

BACK STORY !!!!!!!!!! FRONT STORY !!!!!!!!! SIDEWAYS STORY !!!!!!!!!!! I DON'T CARE !!!!!!!! JUST MORE PLEASE !!!!!!!!!!!!! AND PLEASE ADD MORE MEN AND MORE RACES AND LOTS AND LOTS OF MORE DELICIOUS SEX AND BABIES TOO PLEASE !!!!!!!!!!!! MAYBE A FAE VAMPIRE, WEREWOLF, ETC. HECK EVEN A FAE ALIEN FROM THE LOST RACE THAT WENT TO SPACE OR SOMETHING. JUST LOTS AND LOTS OF GORGEOUS HUNKY MEN. AND COULD YOU "MAYBE" MAKE SOME OF THEM HAIRLESS. FOR THE WOMEN WHO LIKE THEIR MEN SMOOTH AND HAIR FREE WHEN THEIR GETTING LICKED ALLLLL OOOOVER !!!!!!!!!! THAT WOULD BE NIIIIIIIIICE !!!!!!!

well worth the second...well, ok third read! Thanks!

Really great story. Thanks! I was a tiny bit unsure but the ending implied they were human and cole/ Kiran were fae? It was really good