All Comments on 'Friends Helping Friends Ch. 03'

Solid "1" because there's no zero stars,

Can't give less than 1* Sad really

favour and stop writing your an idiot.

OK, if Marie (mommy surrogate) is still boffing Tim (prospective daddy) because she's not yet preggers, she could also do Hubby (albeit with condom)! Leslie (sex surrogate) doesn't have to enter the picture until MS gets knocked up and freezes up!

Both sex scenes were thoroughly described (not sure how erotic I find Hubby's tub-toss - actually, yes I do and it ain't much, but I hope the three ladies reading LW enjoyed it!) so good marks for that. It will be interesting if MS does NOT freeze up this pregnancy, and keeps on doing P.Daddy. Unintended consequences!

I don't know where you are taking this story, but it might help if each section was longer than one page. It is an interesting start, but I must admit that it doesn't look like it will end well.

At least there is no cuckolding, the wife is getting fucked and so is the hubby. Although the wife is getting fucked more so hubby should be out there getting fucked more by Leslie. Wouldn't it be fun in part four if Leslie ended up pregnant?

You will continue to write. I enjoyed your series and hubby really can ask for more favors as his once a week is not equal.