All Comments on 'Friend's Mother Ch. 01'

'nuff said

really poor grammar ....poor story

By the way you use the English grammar it is not your thinking language and it is hard to translate from what ever dialect you speak in India. Not all languages translate the same. The most I can say ,try again but with a dictionary book and a grammar book close at hand, be brave and try again.

It's clear that English is this writer's second language. Keep writing, as it is good practice for learning to both write and speak our language. However, please don't post your stories here unless you get an editor. Good luck to you.

Stop writing right now.

Your innocence makes me smile. Fret not that your style is difficult and the language translation is choppy.

goooooodddddd....pls do continue

I gather that English is not your first language. Oh well, at least you got six words right before you made your first mistake in spelling. After that, it all kind of went down hill.

did Suzy have lot of hair on her armpits. How did that sweaty armpit hair smell?