All Comments on 'Friends 'til the End'

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SachsSachsabout 17 years ago
Just getting interesting

Wow, it was just getting interesting. Love your characters - they seem so normal. It's nice to see a story that builds up the characters and sexual tension before they jump each other. Hope to see more soon! :-) ~ Sachs

warrior_wolfwarrior_wolfabout 17 years ago
Off to a great start

Great start to your story. I love the normality of your characters and the way they interact with each other. It would be a shame if you did not continue with this story. Keep up the great work.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
ZZZZZZZZZ...ZZZZZZZZZZZ...ZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZ

Don't waste your time, but more importantly, don't waste OUR TIME, or space on Literotica by continuing this pathetic storyline.

Word of advice? Stick to your comic book collection, and jack off to Superman alone in your bedroom.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
Great Story

Unlike the person before me, I thought your story was great. You get to know the characters and seem to associate them to someone you know. The story is great so far, I hope you continue!

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Wow

Just when I thought my two favorite characters were about to get it on they didn't love it though I usually don't read stories with parts but I would for this one keep it up

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
PRETTY NICE ALTHOUGH I'M NOT GAY

i liked this story although i'm not gay so i won't be reading the rest in the series. but keep on writing dude ur a very good writer and i like ur style with using bad words that was WAY COOL!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
Hmmm....

The storyline here is interesting. Of course, we've all read stories of this sort before, but it's always a good one. I'd suggest that you make your characters a little less godly, as it will make them a bit more believable.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
what the hell?

dude what the hell? this is the exact same story you already have posted. The Adam and Kyle one. just a different name

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