by jalbpowsl
That was great. Perfectly paced slow buildup of tension and then BAM! Right to the point. Nice work! I look forward to reading more!.
Perfect mix of everything, so romantic and sweet, so steamy and sexy, all around fantastic job.
great story i look forward to reading more of your work, either a sequel of these two or something else. Way to go!!!
I really loved this story, but I do have one small critique. When you spelled "whoa" woah, that was wrong. But other than that, very well written!
One of the best stories I have read on this site for a long time. Beautifully structured, the emotional atmosphere developed engagingly and realistically, with the nuances of passion exquisitely and relentlessly tweaked as they climbed the peaks of love-driven lust following years of unrequited need.
Love this story! Friends to lovers stories are my favorite. They had great chemistry. Beautifully done!