All Comments on 'From Brother to Bitch Ch. 02'

Please send your feedback and post comments. If you love it or if you hate it. I am a new writer just 18 years old, so need some support.

It was really great. Really descripted. You should write a chapter 3. I bet some people would ask for that. I feel bad for James being tormented and I felt bad for him even though it was fiction. Was it? Anyway, it sounded painfull the way you described the part when he got raped selling dvd`s. I couldnt believe his own brother was behind that, but anyway, keep up the good work and i will be looking forward to reading the next installement which i hope will be coming soon.

This story is fantastic. It has a little bit of everything I'm into and more. In the first chapter you mentioned something about shitting in public? I'd love to see that in Chapter 3!

I hope james gets to fuck some one...story is good but i want him to get revenge on vito...

i hope you do one where james gets his own back because this is fucking disgusting.

if anyone actully does things like this then they deserve to be shot in the face

This was the most messed up things I ever read

This is the most degrading story i have ever read. For a brother to do this to his brother is absolutely wrong. I am pretty open minded, but this is worst story I've read. Do not keep writing.

This is so fucked up. Not sexy at all, just sad and depressing. not like a hot sex slave, like a real sex slave that the abusers should be raped in prison. please stop

I loved it so much I want to know part 3