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AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
pubic hair?

at the start on the bus you mentioned pubic hair but further on you mentioned bald pussy so you might want to be more consistant. anyway a great read thank you ;)

Scotsman69Scotsman69over 12 years ago
Hot and dirty

Just what I need sometimes...

wet4urlookwet4urlookover 12 years ago
Loved it

Loved your story and I would love to be on that bus! Please write more stories

AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

I lovethis story... except the main character is a bit passive.

I like men who takes charge and is brave enough to control the situation.

Other than that, it was hot. ^_^

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Just experimenting with writing a few things down....reasonably new to it. Please let me know if you like anything I write by either commenting or messaging me directly :)