All Comments on 'From Co-worker to Student'

You submitted the story too early. It started out being good but you never ended it. You really should finish the story.

Actually this is just the first part of the story. Believe me, this puppy is long, which is why I decided to submit it in parts instead of as one big story. I guess I should have made it more clear as to the fact that it will be continued. Sorry folks!

Story was just getting good and then all sudden very dissapointed that it just cut off...

Keep going Innocent Outside--i'd like to see how this story develops.

I don't vote on stories, protesting trolls and goblins.Great start, but you left us with a tease. Keep writing.

like u r honesty