All Comments on 'From Heaven... Ch. 06'

Absolutely beautiful. Have you considered writing professionally?

I love the story , but am sad that you ended it. Am looking forward to any other storys you write.

This was very well written from the first chapter. I enjoyed each segment, but this one did a very nice job of dealing with the reality of being a woman. One could assume that Ariel would just "know" these things, but it made for a good read as Tim anticipated her needs. I do think you could have extended this chapter, or even written another to explore her life as a woman and mother instead of ending it as you did, since it seemed just a little rushed.

Five stars.

Loved the whole story, and like a previous writer said, hate to see it end, but it is very good.

I've just read this from start to finish. What a beautiful story - very tender and gentle, although I wish Sally had been there too.

Gabby=Gabriel

Mikey=Michael

That's what I'm assuming

WOW!!!

What a different story! I enjoyed the flow of the story and how you moved the characters to keep the readers interest. Thanks for the story and keep writing (I know this story was written awhile ago). Thanks for your time and imagination.