All Comments on 'From Intern to Sex Slave'

I can't help but feel that this one was rather rushed, especially when compared to your other stories (which are very good).

Should have been under mind control

This is the first story I have read of yours, so I cannot make comparisons. But itIS good and well worth reading....and very erotic, too..

I really hope you read this, handcuffgirl. Your stories are fantastic, but some of us just... just don't care about Star wars... I don't mean to offend you, write whatever you'd like, but if you wanted to write more about Riverside or really ANY non-star wars MC stories, I would be very grateful and I doubt I'm the only one.

also this story was fucking hot. but they all are.

Thank you all very much for your feedback. I'm glad you all enjoyed the story. When I wrote it, I had planned on adding some bondage, but I didn't get around to it. I guess I was thinking about that when I listed the story under BDSM. Sorry about that. It does have some D/S though. :) I also admit that I did rush through the story some. I had planned on going on quite a bit longer, including introducing Robyn's brother, who is the Mastermind behind the whole operation. Thank everyone again for your comments!

Bethany

While you're right about some of the similarities of the two stories you mentioned, I enjoyed it. It is definitely a break from the Star Wars Universe you've created. One thing though, jiujitsu is not really taught in police academies, it's more like mixed martial arts. As a recreational sport, it still has a following, but the crash course I took definitely was not judo/jiujitsu/hapkido. Anyway, have you considered writing a story where the main character/victim is male? Perhaps for the male portion of your reading audience? Hint, hint...

Neosteeled

This is my first story of yours. I doubt it will be the last. It would have been interesting if she could have had some conflicts within herself with doing some of the things she's required to do. This could be part of the story that would eventually reinforce her need to depend on Madam.

I think a couple of males would be fun. One who stays male, maybe to encourage female clients and perhaps another who is feminized.

I do think you could enlist the assistance of an editor. There were some noticeable glitches very early on which distracted me.

Overall, I like the progression of slowly becoming more and more the slave. Would liked to have seen, perhaps some punishment and bondage.

It was fairly nice. Interesting use of mind control, lots of sexy clothes and some nice power play. It could use a bit more sex scenes, but overall nice.

Your material is always quite arousing. I'm a big Star Wars fan and of BDSM I love your stories. I like them with a bit more nudity and descriptions of body enhancements but all in all, fun.

Very nice as an introduction to the Imperial Prostitute series, which might be quite intimidating to read because of how vast it is. After this, shorter, story though, reader may know what to expect and getting to read the IP is far easier.

5 stars

I have no idea why or how this story from ten years ago popped up in the similar stories feed of the story I wrote. This is clearly not a BDSM story, it is more of a mind control.