All Comments on 'From Jenny to Mei Ch. 09'

This series gets better and better. I like the characters.

started with this chapter after reading your comment on another story but be assured i'll be back to read it all love your style x

I just wish Mei was dominant instead of submissive, that would be more interesting to read.

I love the twists and turns. Philip and Mei are scary characters, beautifully developed.

There's always something new and surprising and the sex is always hot as hell. I hope you keep writing forever :)

Mei is discovering something I also discovered over a year ago and that is that it is possible to be in love with more than one person at the same time. That the amount of love we can give is not limited.

I really like the pace that the story is taking and am looking forward as always to reading more.

The characters continue to evolve - and reveal - who they are and where they are going.

Lots of surprises from Philip, I am very intrigued to see how things will turn out for him.

I feel like Mei has a better chance of coming out of the other side of this ok. Not, as mentioned, that she is without chance of relapse, but rather that she has learned a lot more than perhaps Philip has. I think he stands a chance of getting into too many 'projects' and having the whole thing go 'boom'.

Regardless the story has so many directions left to explore and I feel like you are prepared to poke into every nook and cranny ;)

Thanks for the great read,

J

The first: "Maybe love, though she knew so little about it, was a spring that didn't empty but just continued to produce?"

An incredible and beautifully worded insight. Especially weaving this metaphor of love together with water and part of her Chinese name. So subtle and rich.

The second: The description of Mei making love to Karla is one of the most erotic scenes in any story I have read. You conflated Mei's burgeoning understanding of love with a rediscovered innocence that only she possesses to purify the nasty, lewd and lascivious acts she performed on Karla by turning them into genuine, heart to heart transmissions of ecstasy. It's really too bad you can't get massages like that at your nearby salon.

The "lips" on a woman's pudenda are called labia. That's it. Yes, labia. It's Latin for lips. This anatomical designation is agreed upon internationally to describe the lips around a woman's cunt. To say "labial lips" is just as ridiculous as to say "anal asshole", or "titty boobs". A typically ignorant American language redundancy. Stop it! The story itself is ok, quite erotic. Educated editor needed.