All Comments on 'From the Past a Present'

Can't find the words to describe this fabulous story. One of the best that I have ever read. You should be very proud.

This was a thoroughly enjoyable story, capturing the gentle teasing of two people completely in love. Thank you for sharing such a nice yet sincere romantic tale.

A very good, heartwarming story. I've been married to my wife for 42 years and I think I have a very good relationship with her - but you've made even me jealous!!!

Fantastic job. Very well written.

Thank you for sharing

The wonderful banter would be enough to make anyone’s life so full of smiles. I wish I could come up with all the back and forth you have found to instill in this wonderful story. Just to say BRAVO!!!!!!!!<P>Thank you for a great piece of entertainment and also the souvenir of my own memories.<P>PT

Every so often on Literotica I find a story (nearly always in the Romance section) which has the ability to take me away from my humdrum existence and transport me into the realm of magic, just wishing that I could experience the happiness which pervades the narrative (I'm not dead yet, so there's still hope!).

This story supersedes them all - the characters, the plot, and especially the dialogue. This isn't supposed to be patronising, but I'm actually slightly surprised that there are such wonderful comments already from the USA, because I thought that this style would go straight over the head of the average American. Bravo to those who persevered to the end where, as I've titled my comment, I REALLY cried! It takes a great story to get to me that strongly, so please - keep writing!

Many thanks for your story, it made me smile, it made me laugh, it made me jealous, it made me cry. I hope you carry on writing such wonderful stories.

the teasing was just great.

You knew where they were going to end up long before they did but the build up was terrifically enjoyable.

Thank you...please continue in the romantic vein. You do that well. And it leaves room for character and dialog and innuendo and all that makes life fun.

Love really is more fun that just sex.

This is something I've missed - a real love story - in Lit. Thanks for providing it.

I think stories come from the author's life view. You must be a happy person Good for you!

Rich

but still a very nice, romantic tale.

Kudos.

The finest of writing!

Very good story flow, very good characterization, very good dialog. I am beginning to get accustomed to and actually enjoy your 'English' way of writing. The tale was touching to the point of blurring my eyes with tears. It is truly romance with an adequate touch of sex.

Your stories are the very best in Literotica. The only thing I could ask for is MORE!!!

Great, great story!

I have read this a couple of times now and can hear their laughter as the worlds roll by.

Thx

I've enjoyed many of your stories but somehow missed this one. It is the sum of considerable talent and, I assume, a great deal of hard work. The dialog was especially wonderful.

I'm admire your skill and I hope you will be writing more in the future.

A wonderful, heartwarming story, about the love between two people. Outstanding dialogue, character developement, and eroticism. As already said in one comment, it is a story that makes one jealous of the participants, but then good romance stories do just that. I would certainly place Kezza67 among the better writers, even of published novels.

You write the most wonderful stories. I look forward to reading more!

Another VERY EXCELLENT, Five Star PLUS Novella…!

Thank You for continuing Your superb Wordsmithing…

This is how people should treat each other - not kid gloves, nor a mailed fist - firm at times, serious at times, loving at all times and a sense of the absurd to keep the humor.

You write well and we do well by you in getting to read your work - thank you more and again.

I more than just enjoyed this story. It pulled me into every subtle nuance and emotion. A well deserved 5 plus.

What a wonderful story of two people who totally "got" each other

There is no reason to regret the lost years. They finally found each other and made the most of the rest of their lives.

I should have read this on the computer monitor, the last part was hard to see on my hand held device.

the bigger screen helped.

some authors are able to write dialogue, others are capable of conversation, a rare few can express banter and have the reader feel part of the interaction. This is an example of how the best share stories with their readers.

thank you

GREAT AUTHORS!

You, sir, are indeed, a great story teller! I have read many tales here on the site, and will say unequivocally, that there are few at this level!

Thank-you for sharing your imagination with us, I am honored to have read this quality work.

Nice, great and lovely story, but, why you need to kill Ann?

Sorry, but I don´t agree this end of the story.

I´m 37 years married with my wife, if I loose her, I don´t want a live for more than 10 minutes after she dies, my life would be empty and useless without her, and could not go on in this world being without my wife. I´m nothing without her.

My apologies for my moment of weakness.

5* for you, but don´t kill more lovers anymore, please.

Anyway, good job.

I apologize for my English, is not my native language.

As the reader it is not my place to comment on where your story should go or end up. You brought me to tears and I believe that is the best compliment I can give you to a well told story. My compliments. I have been married to the same woman for 53 years and understand only too well.

This is the kind of story I look for on this website. Funny and sexual. I really liked how the story moved along and the interaction between the characters. I will definitely be reading more of your stories. Thanks for your time and imagination.

After reading at this site for 15 years, I must say this is one of the best.

Interesting that this cunt writer doesn't open comments for her cuckold stories where the cuck husband takes back a cheating skank wife!!

I loved it! Thank you very much for this story! What a tender relationship you've created. Please keep writing!!!!

Wonderful story. 5 star only because I couldn't post anything higher.

From the dates of your previous works, I assume you have retired from writing. Or chosen another site to publish your works.

Please post in your biography what we can expect.

Thank you for sharing your works--all that I have read reveal you as a gifted writer with passion.

Regards

G