All Comments on 'From Wife To Maid In One Easy Lesson'

That was really well done. You don't see a wife being controlled like that, usually it's the husband, so kudos to you.

just how perverted and weird is Gabrielle? And please tell us in very specific, drawn out detail. Soon!!!

By any standard, the inventive command of the threesome play-by-play here is enough to reduce any reader to jelly. Your characters sure know how to talk--and act-- dirty.

And Gabrielle feels like she stepped out of a film noir. I wouldn't trust that girl's intentions, but whatever they are, it's sure gonna be hot.

Even as a one-off, this is pretty epic! And if this is the beginning of a series, well, whew!-- people best stock up on groceries cause they won't want to leave the house when an installment like this drops. . . .

...the tables were really turned. Point being - I had a creeping feeling half way through that in the end - all of a sudden - he had been programmed and both of the girls had allowed him just one day of erotica with them. I had a feeling that he was going to end up being the maid, not being able to help himself and was programmed to consciousely be aware of all that was happening. What would be happening - easy, the two girls had met, became lovers, were bisexual and now Gabrielle was moving in and the two of them had the master bedroom and frequently had men over to have sex with...hubby had to get them ready and clean up.

Anyway, your story, enjoyed it. A chapter two would be interesting?

Thanks for writing.

Easily one of the hottest stories in recent memory. I love how compliant the protagonist is to Gabrielle's evilness toward his wife - she ups the ante and he goes with it. I know I would act the same way with no regrets. For the sake of your readers, please write a sequel. We have to see how much more depraved Gabrielle can make the situation.

Loved it, so hot i couldnt keep my mind of it. Hit the right spots and resembles one of my fantasies thanx ;) would love to read more like this one, couple dominates a female, male or male&female subs.

You should use more tags than just the one you have. If you were to add cuckquean for example then you would get to much a larger desired audience. Great story, I actively seek out stories where the Cuckcake dominates and I'm so glad I found this one . . . Eventually.