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Click hereThere was no scream as I watched her fall. Only a flash of light as I saw my grandmother's specter enveloped my mothers body and it was over.
Though it is cruel to say, no one mourned the passing of my mother. In death, she freed a man from his self-made chains and a boy from his hate.
I am now a pharmacist and have taken over the family business. Mariah and I have three children, Jenny, Mary and Tim Jr. We still live at the farm where we both grew up and our children experience the three feasts that keep Grandma Jenny Holt alive in our hearts.
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- COMMENTS
Anonymousover 13 years agoOutstanding story and very well written. The author should be proud of this writing. Loved it Keep up the good work.
PrincessErinover 14 years agoGreat story. I really enjoyed reading it although it was a little long. Thanks for sharing.
dth7018over 14 years agoOne of the best! Very well written, with only a few minor editing errors. Keep up the good work!
SkarlittFeenicksover 14 years agogreat story, loved the attention to detail. Fantastic work Old_Blue
YoursSINSerelyover 14 years agoBlue, this is a good entry into the Halloween Contest. Enjoyed it and good luck.
Sierra_m_kiloover 14 years agoFantastic story from one end to the other.
..however, here are a few edits you should make. :)
The poem? Not a limerick.
Hester Prynne, not Prim
Leukemia, not.. whatever spelling that was. :)
"worn work clothes", not "warn work cloths"
"The since of her made me realize..." 'since'?
"Rare breed of woman", not "rear breed"
"While Mariah laid their" -- "there"
"insure that my seed" -- 'ensure'
"Grandma insuring that" -- again, 'ensuring'
