by Etaski
I like it a lot. Short and to the point with just enough info to get me interested. As well as a very hot sex scene. I would love to see more of these characters especially involving her future endeavors with new partners.
Very nice. I love the way you portrayed the fiendish mindset. Short and to the point, yet not lacking in detail. The incestuous undertones add a tantalizing spice to the tale. Great appetizer. Is there a main course?
Very well thought out and written story with plenty of angst, drama, intimacy and sex. I look forward to reading more of Indra's experiences. I appreciate your and your Muse's imagination and abilities to bring it to your story. Thank you for sharing your vision and talents.