All Comments on 'Full Moon Strays Ch. 04'

If I may offer some constructive criticism: ‘dragged’ is the more commonly accepted past participle of ‘to drag’, ‘drug’ just looks out of place. Other than that, it's pretty good; I'll certainly be looking forward to the next installment.

Excellent story, can't wait to find out what happens next. :)

wow,I really like the way this story is going.WAY TO GO....

Loved it - can't wait for the next chapter!

I totaly love to read this thread and impatently wait for each new chapter. Keep doing the awesome job you have been doing.

But you've seen Firefly/Serenity and liked them? Either that or I've just started seeing parallel characters and storylines everywhere.

Good stuff either way.

As usual, the story is superb and the sex is hot. Alpaca, my hat is off.

We have girl meets girl, girl loves girl...now girl loses girl? I hope Red kicks their bloody arses...lol.

Your disclaimers at the start of evèry chapter/story are so long and repetetive that they are no longer effective. Please remove the unnecessary apologies for your writing style. If you must use the remainder, please only at the start of each stand-alone and not every chapter. If readers don't like your story they will never read subseguent chapters.

Youe proofreaders overlook many instances of misspelling, wrong name reference and poor grammar. Your good story-telling saves the day.

"And it was a long, long time before either woman would get any sleep."

'nuff said.

Another great instalment. I found one small type

" its midsection, were cradling his ball" i think this should be balls as in 2 balls :)