All Comments on 'Full Service'

by slyc_willie

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AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Please keep writing. The character development is genius, and you blend it well with the story line.

Thanks please keep it up!

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

you forgot to tag humiliation and raceplay

michapfanmichapfanover 6 years ago
Hot story

I love stories about bitchy (but hot) girls getting put in their place. Not a big fan of anything too rough, but knocking them down a peg in a fun away is so hot.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
E.P.I.C.

Quality writing, totally hot premise... 100%. I've actively gone looking for more of your writing, this was so good. Please write more along this general theme of reluctance/coercion/subjugation.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago

Prostituting oneself for a case of beer isn't non-con. Given how much she was happily offering up, I doubt you can even call it reluctance with a straight face.

ASONJ23ASONJ23about 11 years ago
Excellent!

I really like your writing style and story choices. Very real life.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Great story!

Really enjoyed this story; one question though, did she leave the store topless?

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Sounds like me

I was traveling thru Virginia and I fucked an Indian man and his nephew for some gas a 3 liter pepsi and three hot dogs on a dare and I loved it!

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Latina Names

There were 2 Jennifer latinas in my Rio Grande Valley high school classroom and several more in the school. Not all latinas are named Maria or Lupita, only about 70%.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Awesome

well written.....arrogant bitches like her deserve it......reminded me of my full sservice i received from a bitch like her when i was doing my night shift at a servo!!!!!!!

devilrejectdevilrejectover 12 years ago

i like the story very much. i want to see part 2. :)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
To the people

Who said Jenifer isn't a latina name ... Would you really give YOUR real name?

Anywho ... Great story ... Loved it completely ... Sequel please???

Ravenswing77Ravenswing77about 14 years ago
Mm, superficially hot, but ...

... man, I do think your friend's a liar: hot young teens don't give half hour long blowjobs for a six-pack, when they can just rub up against most guys and that's good for all the drinks they want.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Great story - sequal please :)

Loved the story - agree with another poster that 'Jennifer' wasn't the best choice for a latino name ;) but other then that, great work!! Another repeat performance from her or other desperate hotties (maybe word gets round that he gives up beer for blowjobs?) would make a great series!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
Hmmmm.....U don't know 2 many latinas do you?

I'm a latina. 'Not many of us r named Jennifer.

13691369about 17 years ago
you can write!

Excellent writing. Kept me right in the story the whole time. Very good!

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
cock sucking!

I LOVE that you have great cock sucking in your writing.. i love the feel of sucking cock..... having the guy grab my head and fuck my mouth.....all those fab sounds he makes..it would great if you would write a story with her coming back.... for more!

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
XXXCelent mate!!!

100 celsius for your story. love it. i will bookmark in case of a follow-up story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Oral creampies!

That was fucking amazing. Non-consentual oral rocks!

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
good job

nice there needs to be a part 2

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