by slyc_willie
Please keep writing. The character development is genius, and you blend it well with the story line.
Thanks please keep it up!
I love stories about bitchy (but hot) girls getting put in their place. Not a big fan of anything too rough, but knocking them down a peg in a fun away is so hot.
Quality writing, totally hot premise... 100%. I've actively gone looking for more of your writing, this was so good. Please write more along this general theme of reluctance/coercion/subjugation.
Prostituting oneself for a case of beer isn't non-con. Given how much she was happily offering up, I doubt you can even call it reluctance with a straight face.
I really like your writing style and story choices. Very real life.
Really enjoyed this story; one question though, did she leave the store topless?
I was traveling thru Virginia and I fucked an Indian man and his nephew for some gas a 3 liter pepsi and three hot dogs on a dare and I loved it!
There were 2 Jennifer latinas in my Rio Grande Valley high school classroom and several more in the school. Not all latinas are named Maria or Lupita, only about 70%.
well written.....arrogant bitches like her deserve it......reminded me of my full sservice i received from a bitch like her when i was doing my night shift at a servo!!!!!!!
Who said Jenifer isn't a latina name ... Would you really give YOUR real name?
Anywho ... Great story ... Loved it completely ... Sequel please???
... man, I do think your friend's a liar: hot young teens don't give half hour long blowjobs for a six-pack, when they can just rub up against most guys and that's good for all the drinks they want.
Loved the story - agree with another poster that 'Jennifer' wasn't the best choice for a latino name ;) but other then that, great work!! Another repeat performance from her or other desperate hotties (maybe word gets round that he gives up beer for blowjobs?) would make a great series!!
I'm a latina. 'Not many of us r named Jennifer.
Excellent writing. Kept me right in the story the whole time. Very good!
I LOVE that you have great cock sucking in your writing.. i love the feel of sucking cock..... having the guy grab my head and fuck my mouth.....all those fab sounds he makes..it would great if you would write a story with her coming back.... for more!
100 celsius for your story. love it. i will bookmark in case of a follow-up story.