All Comments on 'Fun and Games'

Your masterful story telling abilities drew me in to this perfect example of what a good erotic novel should be. The intricately woven storyline climaxed with a raw, intimate and realistic description of sexual intercourse. PLEASE KEEP THEM COMING!!! (Cumming?)

What more can I say? It's pretty well been said by someone else. I liked it.

Hey! Bricks, NC, sounds familiar... NCSU? haha. then again like every college I've seen here is covered in bricks.

anyway, hot story.

sorry that their thoughts aren't in italics. that was a mess up... the story works a lot better when the thoghts are in italics.

This story is great please don’t start a new one. please expand this one turn it into a series.