All Comments on 'Fun Day At Work...'

pleeeeeeeesssseeeee

I enjoyed reading this and thought it to be very arousing.

I go with the critic who was constructive re adding characterisation. As for the critic who wrote 'bad bad bad', my advice is ignore them. Their grammar was not up to shakes so how can they even dare to critique?

now that was a very bad story why write that trash

I loved the premise... but would so love you to give more characterisation to the story! It deserves that. 5 stars though :)