All Comments on 'Fun on the Beach'

Nice to see another illustrated story from you. While I enjoy all the stories the pics do add that somethign extra :) Keep up the great stories and ignore the detracters and knockers of your writings and life style. It is yourlife after all !!

If I can be reincarnated, I want to come back as a pair of Jules' panties!

As a piece of written erotica, it is a cracking little story. As an illustrated piece - Wow! What a cute little bum! And the sight of those knickers pulled to reveal the camel toe shot! Wow - again! I love reading these stories as they are all believably real "could actually happen" stories, rather than the impossibly fantasised dreams of some of the others! I don't know where the inspiration comes from - but please! Do keep writing! And more illustrated ones will always be welcome. Love those legs, and that pert little bottom. Many many thanks!

Very well done, and the pictures are excellent.

Another wonderful submission. Thanks!!

Jullie and Steve - You are favorites of mine and I am sorry I have never taken the time to tell you. I love all your stories and I absolutely love the illustrated stories. Julie is a beautiful lady and you both should be proud. Thanks for the fun in your stories too.

great pictures and story !! Always enjoy your stories and pics 11

Hope to see more soon !! Hurry back !!

Really enjoyed your daring exposure...very erotic and you tell it well. Off to read more of your stories now!

High Five, Jules and Steve!

That was some excellent teamwork writing.

That 1st photo ... that wasn't just any ole run of the mill "just a little Camel Toe." That is a work of art! That is Le Creme de Le Creme Camel Toe Supreme! Ohhhhh Yeahhhhh! It is perfect for kissing, licking, sucking, eating, burying one's face in it ... cumming on it! Spectacular!

You write such sexy and amazing stories! The fact that they are true and accompanied by pictures makes them all the better! Ignore any negative comments you may have receievd from judgemental prudes. The don't have to read it if they don't want to.

Jules and Steve,

You hooked us by simply reading your thoughts about comments you have received about other's perceptions of you after reading your stories. We have been fortunate to have had a number of erotic experiences. Most people seem unable to imagine such experiences simply happen. Where you go with event is determined on how open your are to allow things to develop. We would enjoy hearing from you guys if you are interested in swapping stories with each other. Thanks for sharing. BC and Joy.

Really liked the story, especially pics.(nice!) But would like to see more pics of "action" also.

Your stories are AMAZINGLY HOT. I love all of them. This one had keep me wanting more and the final climax had me throbbing with anticipation.

Thanks for sharing it.

Wow, very hot, great way to spend some time on the beach. It is always fun to have some extra hands to help spread the oils.

We are PG this summer, so no nude beach fun this year.

Wife already has super tiny bikini bottom and is really looking to topless suntanning !

Will she allow a handsome admirer put on the oil?

We will find out next year!

We both love your great and very beliveable stories!

G and L

from my list of Favorites. Julie, you are an astonishingly sexy lady. Your stories are incredibly HOT, and coupled with your photos become scorching.

Please continue to share. By the way I just noticed your profile picture. That is one of my favorite poses. At my age the average photo is intellectually stimulating. Somehow you remain physically stimulating. Thanks again for sharing.

Well written and exciting.

Thanks

What a sexy story.

🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟 (5)

👍👍!

Excellent!

The story gets a 5 (★★★★★)!

The pics are priceless!

This is a five star story.! Bravo!

The pics are very very erotic!

👍👍

(a) Story w/o pics: ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ (5.0)!

(b) Pics w/o story: ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐+ (5.25)!

(a) & (b) acting in synergy gave the illustrated wife sex story as published, which I marked:

5.5 = 110% ("above expectations")!

PS

hope above makes sense.

I firmly believe that the outcome of a creative process can be better than the sum of parts.

Bravissima!

This illustrated wife-sex story exceeds the reasonable expectations, hence I marked it as follows: ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐+ (5.5 = 110%).

Thank you for this story. ❤! 👍👍.

👍👍!

The story: 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟 (5)

The pics: 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟+ (5.25 = 105%)

I am copy pasting an abridged version of an earlier comment

Sam37 - over 6 years ago

Julie, you are an astonishingly sexy lady. Your stories are incredibly HOT, and coupled with your photos become scorching.

By the way I just noticed your profile picture. That is one of my favorite poses. At my age the average photo is intellectually stimulating. Somehow you remain physically stimulating.

Thanks again for sharing.

I am posting the copy of an earlier comment, in lieu of my own:

DashDot - about 8 years ago

"OMG

Wow, very hot, great way to spend some time on the beach. It is always fun to have some extra hands to help spread the oils."

I am copy pasting someone else's comment oin lieu of my own:

"Poorwriter - over 10 years ago

Excellent and fun!

Jullie and Steve - You are favorites of mine and I am sorry I have never taken the time to tell you. I love all your stories and I absolutely love the illustrated stories. Julie is a beautiful lady and you both should be proud. Thanks for the fun in your stories too."

In my book this is an excellent story, I gave it:

☆☆☆☆☆- (5-).

I've copy pasted another user's comment:

"Kevsta - over 10 years ago

Stunning

As a piece of written erotica, it is a cracking little story. As an illustrated piece - Wow! What a cute little bum! And the sight of those knickers pulled to reveal the camel toe shot! Wow - again! I love reading these stories as they are all believably real "could actually happen" stories, rather than the impossibly fantasised dreams of some of the others! I don't know where the inspiration comes from - but please! Do keep writing! And more illustrated ones will always be welcome. Love those legs, and that pert little bottom. Many many thanks!"

👍👍!

Beautiful pictures!

Great story: ★★★★★ (5)

Great pictures: ★★★★★ (5)

❤💚❤💚❤+ (5+)

LOVE IT!

The narrative gets 5.0 = 100%!

The eight pics get a 5.25 = 105%!

The picture on biography page: 5.5= 110%!*

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* the bio page pic is among the most erotic ones on Literotica!

Thank you so much, your butt and your mounds look gorgeous.

Absolutely love the playfulness! Really also like that you author together! Very Hot and a Load of Fun!

The picture on your biography page is artistic, erotic, realistic, impressive, powerful, and appealing, all in one!

please write more

Great pictures, Award winning stuff 🏆

Lovely story - the tease is delightful and the culmination exquisite.

Love to get with you and me dressed same as you.

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