All Comments on 'Fun Time at Strip Club'

This didn't make any sense at all. They were having sex in the middle.of the club? It seemed like you put no serious thought into this. And it barely counts as incest. Learn how to write before you make a new story.

definitely doesnt belong in the incest/taboo category, neither of them is the main subject base for the story

also, like the other said, there was almost zero thought behind it

Something this short and confusing

is referred to as a 'brain fart'...

I'm not sure what this is about. What kind of strip night club is this? are women stripping on stage in it? People don't really go to strip clubs to try to hook up with other patrons, women especially wouldn't want to go there. Why couldn't it have been a regular night club? You don't mention anyone stripping. Also I was shocked when it was ended, I thought there was going to be some twist like her brother was at the night club or something and seduced her. And what the hell was the point of her backstory of getting spanked by her dad and basically raped by her brother? Did you just want to write a story about a virgin rushing into sex at a club and you threw some horrible incest backstory in there so you could put it in the more popular incest category?

wowww! girl got virginity taken at the club...eager to learn about what happens next to these two

Where is the strip club in this story?