All Comments on 'Funlover71 - Hard, Fast, Anonymous'

The premise is a fun one, and offers lots of flexibility. It was a twist from the norm for things to be in the chick's control briefly after she followed initial orders, but then the rhythm got all fucked up for me when the guy reasserted some alpha and then nothing graphic or involved happened. If this story had had a couple more paragraphs of interesting reassertion of power in it, instead of sort of skipping quickly through that part, I think it would have been more satisfying. However, the writing is much easier to engage with than many stories here, being reasonably well-edited and unawkward, so that's definitely worth props. Keep writing, but please add a couple more steps to the story next time.

Thanks heaps for your comment, it was first attempt and in hindsight, I did not really let it simmer properly before re-editing and then submitting. I've got another one on the boil and will make sure I slow down a bit and take the action to a less hurried conclusion. Cheers!

Really erotic and well-written story, with really sexy set up. There is something so hot and exciting about anonymous sex. Keep up the great work.

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