by Sonatatre
more chapters would be great.....you need to have Lisa start becoming more confident outside the club as well as inside.....she still seems hesitant and not much self confidence despite the first outing to Futa Club. Also you might look to add more realism into the scenes by describing the emotional feelings of the characters with more details. As an aside....too long of a wait betwixt chapters.......just my .02
It was extremly well written. I think she will be a domme. You got my cock really hard please keep going and have annie &yummi somehow get more involved with lisa and the other sexy older laddies and maybe bring another hermphrodite with a unusual long cock please
Good work, great story. Some real effort went into this and it'spaid off. My only suggestion is to make the queen a bit more deep, or nuanced in her character and attitude.
A beautiful couple I'd like to see more of them. Maybe have Lisa take them up on their offer outside the club? Or she could meet up withi Maria, Mandy and Jenn outside the confines of the club as well.
a wonderful story. i was lucky enough to meet a girl like Lisa. I have to say she spoiled me as far as men are concerned, none could compete with her beautiful big cock and her lovely pussy. Keep writing please
Great writing. It would be awesome if you had Aine and Yumi meet up with Lisa.
Can you add some futa on futa scenes? It'd be a nice change of pace.
I have never actually seen this, and wondering how common this is? this is one of my first reading stories of this subject, and now it has peaked my interest. exciting. great writing.
I love this type of story. Shy futanari just learning that people love her at first for her cock, then for just her. Hate The Queen, but am sure you wrote her that way for that reaction. Aine and Yumi are cute, but Maria, Mandy, and Jenn are better.