by Sonatatre
I am straight, and I love futanari...but not futa + male.
As for the actual story here, its a really good one. It had a satisfying conclusion, and I look forward to more from Sonatatre. Great work!
Good enough as a stroke story but not much else, I think. The plot with the Queen was ridiculous. The way you had everybody going with her tyrannical demands was absurd. There were more than 100 members in the club and just 1 of her. Did she have a big bad army to force everybody in line? What was keeping the banned members from just ignoring her and waltzing right back into the club? Unless she somhow managed to brainwash everybody with her dick, no one with a lick of common sense should have put up with it. Instead of that 'fuck-off" nonsense, Prof. Campbell should have just beat her up and kicked her ass to the curb way back when. There's just no logic behind the plot. But then again, who needs logic to jerk-off. So well done on that part.
Good enough as a stroke story but not much else, I think. The plot with the Queen was ridiculous. The way you had everybody going with her tyrannical demands was absurd. There were more than 100 members in the club and just 1 of her. Did she have a big bad army to force everybody in line? What was keeping the banned members from just ignoring her and waltzing right back into the club? Unless she somhow managed to brainwash everybody with her dick, no one with a lick of common sense should have put up with it. Instead of that 'fuck-off" nonsense, Prof. Campbell should have just beat her up and kicked her ass to the curb way back when. There's just no logic behind the plot. But then again, who needs logic to jerk-off. So well done on that part.
Aw finally end. Great story, i hope some one make this story for hentai manga or futa movie.
Ty Sonatatre.
You should make a sequel about Lisa's mom reaction. Good story over all.
I just read this whole series and I loved it. Nice characters, fun plot and most of all super hot sex. I spent my whole free day obsessing about it. Came once in the morning. Once in the afternoon. And to finish it off I came twice in the evening! I think that is a good testament to how much I loved it.
If you post stories more frequent I think you might become one of the top authors on this site
Fantastic!!! How about a sequel around the raising of the four children - how to respectfully use their cocks, etc. And shouldn't Lisa lose her FEMALE virginity to, perhaps, her Professor? And maybe have a futanari child herself?
I really like the guts on girl focus. Absolutely famtastic.
I agree with the one comment about lisa losing he virigarty the cc and rising the grils
I really liked all of the chapters! I think it would have been good for Lisa's mother to come for a visit and see her 4 grandchildren!!!! Maybe even let Mom in on the action. I also love a good incest story!
Overall, the story was alright, but just too simplistic. It also felt downright sloppy at times, with errors in quotations, wrong words, missed words, etc. I feel as though English isn’t your first language. I figured with a title like ‘Futanari Club’, there would be more futa characters, so it was a disappointment that all the focus was on Lisa. Lisa should have encountered other futanari and explored her desire to get fucked by them. I thought for sure that once Cynthia showed up in the story, that would be a great chance for Lisa to get fucked, but it sadly never happened. Here’s hoping that future stories from you are a bit more polished. 4/5
Beautiful yet simplistic writing a satisfying ending which brought a smile to my face not to mention an overall extremely exciting story.
This story seems to almost exclusively focus on the power of a girl-cock, which seems weird. Only one orgasm is achieved otherwise, and it's lovely because it signifies feelings of love Lisa has for Jenna - but then Jenna and Lisa barely exchange even a few words after that ... I imagine she feels quite ignored now.
Why is Lisa's pussy ignored, and barely mentioned? I realize that coming to understand the sexual purpose of her cock is very important to the story, but surely her pussy can give her twice as many terrific orgasms in one evening as her cock can. Also, maybe she can experience a double orgasm, from a blowjob and having her pussy licked at the same time? Can two futanari cross-penetrate each other when they have sex? Please write more chapters! I really want to know more about the former Queen's punishments too!
I see you are still writing in 2020, I'd like to think you could do a follow up to this story, maybe with the 4 children when they reach 18 ?
But this was worth far more than 5 Stars !
Rapier
Why is her pussy totally ignored for the most part? If she has a fully functioning pussy why is that not a part of her source of pleasure?
Fantastic story and hope you write more about these ladies as I have read this story a few times and it was a very moving loving story and having four (4) babies and need to know how they all love each other and how the babies grow up and how they do brilliant story. Sonatatre love it brilliant writer
Wonderful story, I enjoyed reading it very much, especially the ending. I love stories with fairy tail endings.
Thanks Sonatatre